I dun want to be, what you want me to be...
Please allow me to be free..
Don't put me in the cage of your love...
Please allow me to experience, the open sky above!
A friend:
love, its nt a cage..
its an another wrld said a sage..
where u fly in water swim in space..
where every figure has the same face..
there is no right their is no wrong..
there is no weak there is no strong..
where fr every word the meanin is same
bt every meaning doest have a wrd to claim..
there r no bondages its a beautiful faze
then hw could love b a cage..
there is no right their is no wrong..
there is no weak there is no strong..
where fr every word the meanin is same
bt every meaning doest have a wrd to claim..
there r no bondages its a beautiful faze
then hw could love b a cage..
Nice lines.. Loved the sentencing pattern throughout.. Keep posting more..
ReplyDeleteOn a different note, you could also avoid the usage of SMS lingo in ur poems. Just a personal request but feel free to ignore it.